Evangeline
PART 1
“It’ll all be fine,” said Evangeline’s father while pulling onto an eery road and passing a sign saying, Welcome to Black Creek Georgia. “I’m sure you’ll make a lot of new friends.”
“Yeah I guess.. But you didn’t have to move us to the other side of the country just because mom died and you think that all of your pain will go away,” she answered. He didn’t say anything. “I’m sorry. I shouldn’t have said that.”
“It’s okay Evie, I know this was a big step for us. But I’m sure it’s the right thing for us. It should be somewhere up here. Ahh finally,” her dad said peering out the window. They had arrived at a house with faded white strips of wood and blood red shutters. It was a house unlike either of them had ever seen before. The two got out of the car and started unpacking.
PART 2
“You almost ready for bed?” her dad asked as he stood in the doorway. She nodded as she buried herself under the pile of blankets. And he kissed her on the forehead. “Alright, goodnight then.”
She looked up at him and whispered, “This is gonna be great, dad. I love you.” Just as he turned off the light, a bone-crushing scream came from outside her window. Startled, he turned the light on again.
"Probably just someone messing around." But his face showed a different sign. "Just try and go to sleep."
The next morning Evangeline sat up out of her bed. She looked outside and noticed the magnificent array of colors on the leaves in the woods next to her. She wondered what was behind her window last night. When she went downstairs and ate breakfast with her dad, she asked him if she could play in the woods after school.
“Maybe, but you don’t wanna be late on your first day!”
“Neither do you,” she said and hopped out of her chair and ran outside to catch the bus.
In homeroom, she was welcomed by twenty wild, immature students and was asked by the queen bee of the school, Alexandra Vanderwall, to sit with her; which she agreed to. The next couple days were going great for her. Everyone in school liked her, she was climbing to the top of the popularity chart. Also, she and her father were getting along better than ever.
PART 3
"Would you finally let me go play in the woods?" she pleaded.
Her father responded, rolling his eyes, "Oh fine. I know you've been waiting very patiently. Go ahead." She grabbed her journal that she had kept since her mom died and ran out the door. Trees that seemed to be dressed in black were now towering over her. Evangeline came to stop at a seven foot mound in a clearing. She made her way to the top and sat down, breathing in the autumn’s wind. Her leather book was now open to a blank page.
Dear Diary,
So, we just moved to this old, weird house. It’s quite creepy actually. But the thing that scares me the most is all the noises at night. It is the most bloody awful sound I’ve ever heard. It’s a mix between something dying and screaming for help. Other than that, school is great, I’ve met so many nice girls and it seems like everyone likes me. I feel like Alexandra is trying to change me, in a bad sort of way. She’s really mean to be honest. She lowers girls’ self-esteem and says things behind peoples backs. But I don’ t say anything about it and try to ignore it. I actually invited her over on Friday to stay the weekend because i want us to get along. Fingers crossed.
XO Evangeline
Looking up at the sky, she stood up and brushed off the dirt on her bottom. The clouds were now somber so she started down the hill. All of a sudden, she hears leaves crunch behind her. The movement startles her so much, she trips and falls to the ground. Flat on her face, she slowly opens her eyes and there it was. A raven, with its head torn off. One scream, and everything went cold.
PART 4
“11:27,” she should be back by now,” her father is now sweating profusely. “Thanks again sheriff, for coming over. I’ve called her many times on the cellphone I gave her on her last birthday. What if someone took her?”
Sheriff Hitchens put his finger to his lips and pointed at the door, “I think someone’s outside the door.” He put his hand on the gun strapped to his hip. Slowly, he opened the big red door in the middle of the hallway. And there she was, standing in the doorway, covered from head to toe in dirt.
She was a mess, diary in hand, and eyes wide open. Its seemed as if she was standing there, but she wasn’t.
“Evangeline! Is everything okay? I was so worried about you,” her father yelled as he ran into her arms. Then, she snapped out of her trance.
She looked at her father and Sheriff Hitchens.”What happened? How did I get here?”
PART 5
After taking a bath, her father handed her a steaming cup of camomile tea. “Are you feeling any better?” he asked as he tucked her in bed.
“Yeah, my neck still hurts though.”
“Let me look at it,” he said moving her hair to one shoulder. There were two half-inch holes in the center of her neck, oozing with blood from both sides. His eyes were now wide open “Evangeline, what do you remember happening after you left the house?”
“Well, um. First, I was walking for a little while when I came upon this clearing with a hill in the middle of it. So, I sat on the hill for about ten minutes and wrote in my diary. It started to get dark so I started walking back. Then, I heard something behind me, I got scared, and I fell. When I opened my eyes, there was a raven. But, its head was tore off, shredded. Then.. everything was cold. And all I remember after that was you hugging me.” She started to cry.
Then there it was again, the noise. It came from the woods. Now louder than before.
“Its alright sweetie,” he said kissing her forehead. “You’re safe now.”
PART 6
The next evening was friday night and the doorbell rang. Evangeline ran to the front door.
“Hi Alexandra! I’m so glad you came.”
“Yeah sure,” she responded, hugging her, them made her way into the living room. In the next couple hours they danced, watched movies, ate pizza and ice cream and Alex’s favorite, gossiped.
“Lights out in five ladies,” her dad yelled from across the hallway. The girls giggled and the light went out.
Two hours had passed and the clock read “12:57.” A loud noise coming from down stairs awoke Alex. She looked over to find Evangeline but was no where to be found. As she made her way down the staircase, there was another banging noise.
“Evangeline is that you?” Alexandra was now shaking and almost at the end of the hallway.
“I’m going to kill you.” She turned around and screamed. It was Evangeline. All you could she was the whites of her eyes. Evangeline ran at her and grabbed her neck, pushing her up again the wall. “How’s popularity and all your little followers gonna save you now, huh?”
Her father ran down after hearing the scream. “Evangeline stop right now!” He pulled her off of Alex and wrestled her to the ground. “Alexandra, get me the rope under the kitchen sink,” he said trying to keep her down. It was obvious now. They both knew what had happened. Evangeline was possesed by whatever was out in the woods that night.
PART 7
The doorbell rang again. “Who’s that,” Alex asked. She had been waiting into corner of the living room for fifteen minutes now for her parents to pick her up. He opened the door. It was Sheriff Hitchens and the priest from Black Creek Community Church.
“This is Richard who I told you about,” the sheriff said motioning to the man in white robes. “He has done a couple of exorcisms in his days. Alexandra your parents just pulled up. You can go now.”
“Exorcism? Are you crazy? I’m not letting some guy I don’t even know cast satanic spells and what not on my daughter.”
The old man looked at him right in the eye, “Well how else do you expect to get the demon out of her. Now, if you don’t mind, where is she?”
He pointed to the closed bathroom door with nail marks on the outside. The three made their way over and opened the door. Evangeline was screaming and kicking, wrapped in rope in the bathtub.
“Sheriff, we need to tie her down to the kitchen table. Father, I need four candles around the table, dirt in a circle connecting the candles, in a circle, and a bowl for the Holy water I brought.”
When the exorcism was ready, her father and the sheriff were holding Evangeline down on the table.
She kept screaming and the priest started pouring Holy water on her, chanting, “Pater in nomine tuo.” Each word getting louder and louder, “quod aliqui mali tantæ Evangeline animam liberare.” At the last word, he pushed his palm to her forehead. Her eyes rolled back to their normal position and she stopped moving.
“Its is finished.”